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April 18, 2010
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Usa Ready for the Ball by AngelRaye Usa Ready for the Ball by AngelRaye
I felt like drawing a teenage Chibiusa in a fancy ballgown. I was really pleased with how this turned out. As always comments are preferred over faves.
Chibiusa (c) Naoko Takuechi
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This is my first time to Critique and english is not my first language so do not blame me, please...

My attention is drawn to the dress. I like it because it is smooth and wavy like a Sailor Senshi fuku (costume). I also like the shading on the dress. You kept some elements from the Sailor Senshi fuku, which I like because she is in fact a Sailor Senshi!

The pose is interesting because she looks like she is going to invite you to dance with her! The pose also make her look elegant.

The background is owerhwelming, in a positive way. The colours have the right amoung of pallidnes for my taste. I like the pattern because it reminds me of Takeuchi-sensei's pictures.

The things you can improve is her eyes. I think the left eye are a bit too far to the left. Since her face is seen from the side you should also draw the left eye seen from the side. It is difficult to draw eyes from the side but I am sure you can do it if you try. I also think the hair could be more wavy.
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trinityblood96 May 18, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
Great job She looks soo grown up
trinityblood96 May 20, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
ur welcome
So pretty. I want to draw Chibiusa. I love her dress.
OMG! One of the most beautiful Chibiusa dresses ever!!!

BTW, I'm sorry it took me so long to look through your gallery! My gallery still has 522 images in it from the time I was really busy with school
Thanks and no problem :hug:
Rose74 May 8, 2010  Student Writer
Pink is not my favorite color, but you certainly used it very well here! :aww: I also love her eyes. :thanks:
Rose74 May 9, 2010  Student Writer
I'll just use this one post to say you're welcome to all the comments you responded too. ^^; They were all great, and I hope you keep it up. :thanks:
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