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Usa Ready for the Ball by AngelRaye Usa Ready for the Ball by AngelRaye
I felt like drawing a teenage Chibiusa in a fancy ballgown. I was really pleased with how this turned out. As always comments are preferred over faves.
Chibiusa (c) Naoko Takuechi
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This is my first time to Critique and english is not my first language so do not blame me, please...

My attention is drawn to the dress. I like it because it is smooth and wavy like a Sailor Senshi fuku (costume). I also like the shading on the dress. You kept some elements from the Sailor Senshi fuku, which I like because she is in fact a Sailor Senshi!

The pose is interesting because she looks like she is going to invite you to dance with her! The pose also make her look elegant.

The background is owerhwelming, in a positive way. The colours have the right amoung of pallidnes for my taste. I like the pattern because it reminds me of Takeuchi-sensei's pictures.

The things you can improve is her eyes. I think the left eye are a bit too far to the left. Since her face is seen from the side you should also draw the left eye seen from the side. It is difficult to draw eyes from the side but I am sure you can do it if you try. I also think the hair could be more wavy.
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trinityblood96 Featured By Owner May 18, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
Great job She looks soo grown up
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner May 19, 2010
Thank you :)
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trinityblood96 Featured By Owner May 20, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
ur welcome
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ElysianNeptune Featured By Owner May 16, 2010
So pretty. I want to draw Chibiusa. I love her dress.
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner May 17, 2010
Thanks :D
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mimineko828 Featured By Owner May 10, 2010
OMG! One of the most beautiful Chibiusa dresses ever!!!

BTW, I'm sorry it took me so long to look through your gallery! My gallery still has 522 images in it from the time I was really busy with school
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner May 10, 2010
Thanks and no problem :hug:
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Rose74 Featured By Owner May 8, 2010  Student Writer
Pink is not my favorite color, but you certainly used it very well here! :aww: I also love her eyes. :thanks:
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
Thank you :)
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Rose74 Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Student Writer
I'll just use this one post to say you're welcome to all the comments you responded too. ^^; They were all great, and I hope you keep it up. :thanks:
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner May 10, 2010
I plan on it :D
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Rose74 Featured By Owner May 11, 2010  Student Writer
:peace:;) Good luck my friend, in everything. :huggle:
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner May 11, 2010
Thanks :D
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Rose74 Featured By Owner May 12, 2010  Student Writer
:highfive:
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shadowpeach89 Featured By Owner May 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Pretty.
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner May 7, 2010
Thank you:)
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shadowpeach89 Featured By Owner May 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome
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etoile2109 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2010
Really beautiful :love::clap:
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2010
Thanks :hug:
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etoile2109 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010
You're welcome^^
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Bianca-Jo Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the dress!
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2010
Thanks :D
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Black-Umi Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
she came out beautiful :heart:
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010
Thanks :)
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KaliannShevlin Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
I love the waves.
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
Thank you :)
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KaliannShevlin Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
your a good fashion designer
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
Thanks :D
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KaliannShevlin Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
welcome
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alloria-sjg Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
That is really awesome, I love the dress.
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
Thanks :D
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iTiffanyBlue Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010
She looks so pretty! You did a really nice job. The shading does look lovely ^^
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
Thank you :hug:
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MasterOfRa Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, I love the dress. Great job.
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
Thank you :)
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YuniNaoki Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the gown! :D
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
Thank you :D
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lilyvsstar Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010
pretty dress!
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
Thanks :)
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HeartsPocky Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010
The color choices are fabulous; I love how she's so pink and that's pulled into the background, but there's enough other colors so it's not overloading the senses.

For the face, I would elongate it slightly and add a bit more roundness (emphasizing cheeks, chin, etc) so it wouldn't have such a "V" shape and the features would sit a little more naturally. The right arm should curve a bit where the elbow is. As well, the shoulders need to slope slightly more to add in the collar bone, so the breasts rest lower.

You have a really good handle on ruffles. The dress is very detailed while still being simplistically cute. :) Good job.
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
Thank you :) I always have a hard time with the face ^^;
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HeartsPocky Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
No problem... faces are a pain, I did the exact same thing (slightly V-shaped face etc) for a long time. And I still can't get eyes quite right haha. :)
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Orangepearlvoice Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
The skirt of the dress is amazing!
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
Thanks :)
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Nemesis12 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010
Pretty.
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
Thank you :)
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Nemesis12 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
You're welcome.
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LadyUsagi Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010
shes gorgeous :D Your art is always getting better :heart: I love the deep shading, and how she seems to be kinda flowing :aww: :rose:

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:giggle: Have a cookie for a very cute drawing! :D
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AngelRaye Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
Thank you :giggle:
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LadyUsagi Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
np :D
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