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:iconangelraye:
I am experimenting with different facial expressions now. Here is Meiyo looking angry. As for the background, I thought fire would be the best since fire sometimes symbolizes anger. Please critique and comment. I want to improve facial expressions.
Sailor Moon (c) Naoko Takuechi
Meiyo Aino is mine.
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~SailorSun101 Nov 30, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
This is really good! I don't see anything to improve!:hug:
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~SailorSun101 Dec 2, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
My pleasure!
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:iconsmeagol92055:
I'd be angry, too, if my limbs were that disproportionate. I do believe that young woman is suffering from a case of encephalitis.
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:iconangelraye:
She's a child and the limbs are a work in progress.
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:iconsmeagol92055:
Childrens' limbs are still proportionate to their body. Is she suffering from dwarfism, perhaps?
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:iconangelraye:
Like I said. It's a work in progress.
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=Paprika-Studios Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For your first attempt with facial expressions, this is very well done. I can definitely see that she is angry in the image, even without the help of the pose. My suggestion for you to try is to work with your eyebrows. I think the eyes you have got down perfectly but the eyebrows in a way contradict the emotion. Those lines would either be a hard line or the bend of the eyebrow would be backwards. Here's an example - I do apologize since the eye is in my style but the eyebrow is the top line: [link] Otherwise, very awesome job with your first attempt! I look forward to more!
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:iconangelraye:
Oh thanks! I'll definitely keep this in mind.
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*rins-art Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist
she look vey angry~...
as for the background.. though the colors is actually fire colors.. it remind me of sunset more..
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